sufficiently(sufficiently funded)
The daily commute wasted nearly thirty minutes, a delay sufficiently irritating that the manager took initiative to negotiate remote work options.
拆解:
主干事实
The daily commute wasted nearly thirty minutes
(每日通勤浪费近分钟)
核心动词 wasted 强调时间损失,奠定负面基调
同位语+程度修饰
a delay sufficiently irritating that...
(一种足够恼人的延迟,以至于...)
a delay 作同位语抽象概括前句现象,sufficiently irritating 为形容词短语量化问题严重性
结果状语从句
that the manager took initiative to negotiate remote work options
(促使经理主动协商远程办公方案)
that 引导结果从句,took initiative 体现主体能动性
同位语 (a delay) 将具体事件抽象化,使后续评价更具普适性
sufficiently irritating → that...(通过形容词叠加制造因果逻辑链)
took initiative(替代被动式如 was forced to,突出主体决策力)
每日通勤浪费近三十分钟,这种延迟足够恼人,以至于经理主动协商远程办公方案。
意译
每日通勤耗去近三十分钟,效率低下到严重干扰工作,促使经理主动协商远程办公方案。
意译调整说明:
wasted → 耗去
保留时间损失含义,避免直译浪费的过度负面色彩
抽象化处理同位语
a delay → 效率低下(点明问题本质)
升级程度表述
sufficiently irritating → 严重干扰工作(明确工作场景影响)
强化行为动机
took initiative to negotiate → 主动协商(中文四字短语更简洁有力)
同类表达参考
Data processing took over six hours per batch, a time lag critically unacceptable that the lab allocated emergency funds to upgrade servers.
(每批数据处理耗时超六小时,这种时间延迟完全无法接受,促使实验室拨付紧急资金升级服务器。)
生活场景:
The leaking faucet dripped every seconds, a noise sufficiently maddening that he called a plumber at midnight.
(水龙头每秒漏一滴水,这声音恼人得让他半夜打电话叫了水管工。)